Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Box 16

I have not started to describe the place that the men practice. However, when I do start to explain the setting around the players I have many ideas of what I want to use. I want to be able to tell my audience the differences of the places that they play to the places that they practice. I know that the team has practice inside the field and sports building on Ball States campus when the weather is not cooperating. When the weather is nicer they work out on the practice football field. While inside, they have late practice after eleven at night. When they get time outside they tend to practice from about 5 until dusk. They go until they can no longer see the ball.

After reading this through I realize that the field and sports building is an insider term for Ball State students. I think that I will describe the gym and the field that they use so that the reader can have a feel of where I am when talking about the play. I also assumed that the reader knew that lacrosse was played with a small white ball instead of explaining it.

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